Oblivion

in #hive-1614654 months ago

Lo ví
con su pelo largo aunque lo quiere corto
Me revolvió todo lo que ya tenía acomodado
Un minuto sin abrazos,
sin el cariño o la atención de otras tardes
Ya no me pide que le haga magia
Sesenta segundos son suficientes para entender que
Veinte elefante en una cristalería son menos desastrosos que un niño con los sentimientos


I saw it
with his long hair although he wants it short
He shook up everything I had already arranged
A minute without hugs,
without the love or attention of other afternoons
no longer ask me to do magic
Sixty seconds are enough to understand that
Twenty elephants in a glass shop are less disastrous than a child with feelings


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Andas inspirado ,que bonito♥️

Gracias, hay que aprovechar cuando llega y escribir todo lo posible, ya después se editará para que queden mejor escritos 😅

Muy lindo y genial escrito, y sí tienes toda la razón en esa ultima oración pero al final niño es niño xD, gracias por compartir ♥

Si ellos por lo general van a lo suyo sin medir consecuencias 😅

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