Freestyling Free write on my Break at the Lake

in #poetry2 years ago



Sorry to keep tagging you @nonameslefttouse, but you really did inspire this, my brain has been talking to itself in freestyle rap since I read your comment this morning XD

Decided to try out the five minute free write I'm always seeing, and this is how it came out-




Logic ain't logic no more and common sense is a phrase of the past.

We're living in a world where up is down and wrong is right and first is last.


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Washed brains on the left and right, what a cringy fight, when you both are blind.

I guess it's really hard to see the light, when you've lost your sight to the hive of mind.


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Maybe put the phone down, take a look around, tell me what you see.

Without a filter, you are all the same, passing round the blame, "b...but it's all about meee!"


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Don't get me wrong I'm at fault too, just like you, I lose my way.

Passing judgment on the world at large, on whose in charge, I'm crying Foul Play!


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Do I really have room to talk, do I walk the walk and keep off the stage?

We really need off the wheel to figure out what's real...


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And get on the same page!


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Quash the rage to better gauge this golden age being taken for granted by some slanted wannabe heroes with implanted digital thoughts made only from zeros. Just be the one and have some fun.

The world is changing and we need to go with the flow, heading into the age of creators, there's no time for haters in this magic show

I saw a fresh profile pic and stopped for a closer look
Figured I'd add two cents and tripped when I tried to type with my foot
Dropped the damn phone and made a scene then grabbed it quick like nothing to see!
Walked it off like two left feet at least it wasn't a selfie

Just playing around, the last one blended into the background, thought I'd try something new, it's funny cuz I thought of you, when you asked if I changed, before the edit I thought uh oh, hope this guy's not deranged...

..haha! Yep I did see it when it said Did you change right in front of me, and in the context of the beach I was scratching my head...

Okay I actually didn't mean to keep rhyming, I can't seem to stop, but that is a very memorable first meeting that I will treasure XD I think the funniest part of it is imagining you rereading your comment and thinking Well that might sound odd, better clarify I'm talking about the profile picture lol!!

I sincerely mean it when I say I am super glad to have made your acquaintance!

Hear the gavel? ...

So guilty. I'll never admit how much time I spend editing content but take how weird I am in the comment section and multiply it by a lot.

I hope you know how accurate your imagination is. I was like, more specific—stat.


Thanks for being so nice! The pleasure's mine. Looking forward to getting to know you and all of your profile photos. :wink:

I've been called intuitive here and there ;) In this case it helps that we are kindred, haha, I have definitely edited my share of comments and was drawing on experience XD

My intuition tells me this is the start of a beeyootiful friendship!:0)

Nice Poem , i like it

Why thank you! :)

I went back to read the bold bits to see if it made its own story/said something different and it almost worked up to the end XD

Haha, didn't even think of that! Just a little tweak and I'd have it :0)