HIVE OPEN MIC No. 134 - Forgiveness (Me and You - Original)

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Hi Hive,

Please accept this entry of mine for this weeks theme of 'Forgiveness' - The song i wrote a few days ago, is all about forgiveness, so just luck that it fits this weeks theme.

Sometimes the hardest person to forgive is ourselves, forget about forgiving those who we feel have wronged us, it is ourselves we need to embrace sometimes and is the most difficult.

Lyrics:

Dying to be different
In a world that's all the same
Dying for forgivness
When there's no one left to blame
The walls are getting taller
No ones getting in
Your looking for the answers
But don't know where to begin

But if you shine a light
Into the darkness
And look within
Take a hold
Of your hurting soul
And walk with him

Becoming like your father
Is a nightmarish dream
But acting like you do
As your world is crumbling
Your mother gave up trying
She never wanted you
No-ones come to hold your hand
No-one understands

But if you shine a light
Into the darkness
And look within
Take a hold
Of your hurting soul
And walk with him
And i'm counting on you
To pull me through
There's no one left
It's just me and you
Me and you

Now there's noise
Where once there was silence
Now there's choice
We'll keep the light from the darkness
Our souls
Our friends
Are standing beside us
Ohhh

Love is the light
Love is the light

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Amigo fue un gusto escucharlo, la guitarra se escucha muy bien, al igual que su voz gracias por compartir 🥰 saludos bendiciones

Thankyou!

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Thanks for that!

You're welcome, I'd comment more, but my life has become exceptionally busy all of a sudden

No need, i think life has a way of keeping us busy at the times we need it less.

Lovely song. Well done.

Thanks Barb!

nice song friend.
I agree with you. sometimes it's hard to forgive yourself and accept it

Thanks, means a lot.

You my friend are creative....... Good job sir

Beautiful - loved it when you played it down the pub, too! You write excellent lyrics and you have a knack for writing hooks, too.

thanks, danielle!

Saludos @todayslight

Una letra maravillosa la que escribiste, y concuerdo contigo, Light is love

La esperanza nos hace mejores personas, me gustó no sólo tú composición sino también como la cantaste.

Un abrazo fraternal.

Thanks man!!!

the lyrics of the song you created are very touching, hopefully your work can continue to entertain us😁

Thanks man!

we need to embrace sometimes and is the most difficult
Well said! 😃
Great stuff, Lewis!

This is a beautiful original song, I like your voice and your guitar playing.

I can not agree more with you, the most complicated thing is to forgive ourselves, but it is necessary to do it because only being at peace with ourselves is that we can be at peace with the rest of the world.

Thank you very much!

Greetings dear friend!

I am so glad that you submitted your original song related to forgiveness and just this is the theme of this week!!!!

Beautiful guitar accompaniment!!! Very nice tone of voice!!!

Thank you very much for participating this week!!!!

Receive a strong and warm hug from me!!!!

Blessings

Thank you so much.

I think your songs are great. Keep doing the productions with @purplesinger and you'll have the makings of a fine album.

!LUV

ha, thanks, she's great at the production!

So tender music you have brought today!
Yes, sometimes it is hardest to forgive ourselves, but with love, self-love we should be able to do that too. And better soon than later :)
Thank you for your beautiful song!

Thank you so much!