The Time In Between

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The time in between
to observe the gentlest of forms,
move into this moment of reveal,
surrendering,
as we
descend into the chaos that ensues,
swept up into this spiral,
feeding the minds of those
that slipped away
as our grip eased upon the words that spoke of our freedom,
of movement
that sunk our fears amongst this buried treasure,
held by the light
as we surrender
to fight amongst those who remain and speak of truth and unfathomable things,
echoes within the chamber of our resurrection.
we call to attention,
the broken shards that cut us, as we rise above the lost,
those who wander aimlessly,
taken by their pain
consumed by their guilt, of expectations
that call for blood and segregation,
tales of demons, that ride upon the wings of angels,
desperation,
breaking out of this mold,
let the fire consume,
burn away the last of that, which ties them to their shadow self.
Rejoice,
the exploration of power that comes from within,
held within our fragile being,
spells to weave our intentions
to cast away the dark, that lurked behind each contemplation,
we shape
our stories,
each strand
a web, that brings it all together
that feeds the light
and illuminates the way,
as we co create each day.

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The timing of your words created for me a sensation that I was reading calmly, softly, and then the intensity of the poem grew larger and larger as the battle between dark and light that you were describing was unfolding, ending with the clear victory of light. Existentialist, and as always, very interesting.

Thank you so much for you wonderful feedback @cesarj21 xxxx

tales of demons, that ride upon the wings of angels — this is actually quite deep. This could signify the anonymity of the mind . No one knows what’s on the other person’s mind except he cares to speaks about it .
It could also mean an alter ego effect! There aren’t just two sides to everything , these days there are many sides to everything .
Well written poem! Best Regards !!

Thank you @typebox, I just let this poem flow from me, whilst trying to embrace the diversity and fragility of our minds and our truths xxxx

our stories,
each strand
a web, that brings it all together
that feeds the light
and illuminates the way,
as we co create each day.

I think we all need a time in between to recover some energy and be at peace with ourselves, a nice poem as always and very nice image, greetings and hugs =)